My Angel Poem

Death comes in many shapes and forms and also the hearts that were torn .
I walk amoung the dead and I hear them speak inside my head .
Death comes in a blink of an eye and then you realize it ' s time to die .
I embrace the dead as I walk for I can hear them talk .
Death is my friend and lover and There can be no other .
They say " Rest In Peace " but they just don ' t know That when I die it will be me who Walks In Peace and that is no lie .
When Death comes to take me away I will not cry for my Angel will come and then It 's time to die and move on to another life .

This is deadicated to the Angel of Death .

Nice job. It reminds me of something I wrote a few years back. Thanks for the memories. :D lol

Definitely not bad, but there are several points that could use work.

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